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雅思写作之“步骤”及“机构”篇

来源: 北京津桥国际学院语言培训      编辑:佚名

雅思写作之“步骤”及“机构”篇

一、写作步骤

1. 理解Task 2 的问题。

在你试图回答这个问题之前,你必须理解它。这样,你就会确切地知道考官在考什么。学生们犯的的错误之一就是没有完整地回答问题,这使得他们的分数无法超过5分。

要分析问题,你必须首先识别问题类型,然后识别问题中的关键字,最后识别指示词。这将帮助你准确地理解考官想让你做什么。

2. 规划你的答案。

在写作任务2中获得最高分的学生总是用10分钟来计划他们的答案。规划可以帮助你在写文章之前组织好你的想法和结构,节省你的时间,帮助你写出一篇清晰连贯的文章。

3.写一个介绍(introduction)。

引言应该告诉考官文章的其余部分是什么,并且直接回答问题。这告诉考官你知道你在做什么,并帮助你写你的主体段落。

4. 写出主体段落(body paragraph)。

这是你给考官更多细节的地方。你可以通过陈述你的主要观点,并通过解释和相关的例子来支持这些观点。

5. 写一个结论(conclusion)。

在你的结论中,你应该对你在文章的其余部分已经说过的话做一个总结。

二、文章结构

1. 介绍(introduction)

句子1-改述问题

句子2-主题陈述(同意/不同意…/这篇文章同意/不同意…)

句子3-提纲句(这篇文章将讨论…)

2.正文第1段(main Body Paragraph 1)

句子1-主题句

第二句-解释主题句

句子3 -例子

3. 正文第2段(main Body Paragraph 2)

句子1-主题句

第二句-解释主题句

句子3 -例子

4. 结论(conclusion)

第1句-总结和意见

三、样题

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer (回答范式)

It is argued that volunteering should be made part of the school curriculum. This essay agrees with that suggestion completely because of the benefits it brings to pupils. The essay will first look at how voluntary work can help students develop soft skills and then discuss how these extracurricular activities are valued by universities and employers.

Education should not be limited to strictly academic pursuits and those in education should also develop life skills, such as teamwork, empathy and self-discipline, and one of the best ways to hone these aptitudes is through community service. Serving those less fortunate than ourselves teaches us many lessons including how to work with people from other backgrounds and the value of hard work. For example, I personally volunteered to spend 6 weeks in Africa teaching disadvantaged children and this led to a much higher work ethic when I returned to my studies.

Many colleges and companies are also increasingly looking for this type of experience. Most school leavers have the same grades and charitable works can help set you apart from the herd. For example, Cambridge and Oxford receive thousands of applications from straight-A students every year and can only accept a small percentage of applicants. What you have done outside the classroom is often the thing that differentiates you from everyone else and gets you that coveted spot.

In conclusion, teenagers should be made to partake in unpaid work as part of their schooling because it will help them learn things they wouldn’t ordinarily learn from their teachers and it will also boost their chances of getting into third level education.

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